Not bad at all. The piano/pluck seems to stick out too much. Try using a half synth half piano sound as a background to blend it in a little. Also, I wouldn't leave this in the trance genre. The more proper area would be techno. It will most likely get down voted if it stays in the trance genre. I mean it is kind of trance, but trance has more of a hyper melody with more of a club type kick drum. This a great piece of music though. Keep up the good work!